All Comments on 'In the Beginning'

really well done -- sly and sexy

The woman is Satan right, with the perfect beauty and flame hair? Obviously, you're calling the Fruit of the Tree of Good and Evil the woman's genitalia... but the Devil was thwarted, by God approaching. Interesting. Are you saying that because of this interruption -- and the fact that the Devil didn't take Man's seed -- Satan's plan was somehow thwarted? Is this now, then, the collapse of Heaven at the hands of Satan, who has finally acquired the Seed of Man?

I like it. It's very good. Very good indeed, the theme of corruption and self-hate is there -- a classic martyr story, love your work.

Paradise lost & regained. 😏

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