All Comments on 'In The Library Ch. 01'

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TernomTernomalmost 10 years ago

Amazing! I definitely want to see more! :)

ElectricBlueElectricBluealmost 10 years agoAuthor
the library in this story is real

Everything else is not!

aisielynnaisielynnalmost 10 years ago

*warm smile*

Very lovely.... truly enjoyed the way you told of his first encounter with this exotically erotic woman. Will look forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the wonderful writing.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Really good writing and story telling. Some distracting typos to fix: Paragraph 5, jewelry is spelled wrong. Para 9, a "byre" is a cowshed. I'm sure you mean "fire". Para 18, "starling" should be "startling".

ActingupActingup28 days ago

The Currawong was real. Are we in Sydney, Canberra, or…?

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.

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