by ElectricBlue
Really good writing and story telling. Some distracting typos to fix: Paragraph 5, jewelry is spelled wrong. Para 9, a "byre" is a cowshed. I'm sure you mean "fire". Para 18, "starling" should be "startling".
*warm smile*
Very lovely.... truly enjoyed the way you told of his first encounter with this exotically erotic woman. Will look forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the wonderful writing.