All Comments on 'In the Line of Duty'

Considering that the author was clearly NOT writing in his native language he did very well. For those of you who made those disparaging remarks let me ask, how many languages, other then your native language, can you write in as well has he author did?

The ending is an anti-climax. I would have preferred she'd ended up, a whore in some brothel, a slave in some harem, or dead; but a friendly relationship kills the storey.