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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

This would be wonderful except for the overuse of the word slut. Slutslutslut. Enough already. Couple that with the pov, essentially, he's calling me a slut. Just no. Had you made it straight third person, I wouldn't feel personally verbally assaulted. Otherwise, the scene is hot.

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I'm submissive and enjoy writing stories based on my fantasies. Some of my stories are based on the fantasies of people I've chatted to online - I've taken the basics of their fantasy and worked it into an overall scene that I think I might enjoy. I find it's a useful way to ...