All Comments on 'In the Waves of Passion Pt. 01'

two different languages is one to many, i think it would have been good if i didnt give up reading it because i was to distracted and frustrated stick to one language please

This is GREAT!!! You have crafted some super hot hot hot details. Please continue it. I really like the bilingual feature. I don't know urdu but it makes it more realistic and interesting.

Love the two languages

Welcome to 'The Unbelievable Dullness of Reading'...

Christ this was dull, and pretentious, and for something allegedly revised and released as a whole thing, you, the author, need to sit down and have a long and heartfelt talk with your editor, because he obviously didn't put in as much time as you seem to believe he did - unless it was you, which is always a bad idea. NO stars, it's still a mess