All Comments on 'In Which an Elven Servant... Ch. 01'

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YshomatsuYshomatsualmost 6 years ago

Excuse me there seems to be a problem with your post for this is but a taste of the story we wish to read! And a great start it was, please continue!! I look forward to seeing where this goes. Hopefully with longer chapters, even if only slightly so.

Phantom14Phantom14almost 6 years ago
I'm getting interested.

This is a relatively unique story compared to most that involve a Succubus Summoning. I'm looking forward to where the characters go from here. I would like to know what the two main characters Lorelei and her Master look like though. At the very least, some defining characteristics.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Fabulous

Everything about this is fabulous. The inner voice of Lorilei is so entertaining. I plan to enjoy this story immensely. Keep up the good work.

striker24striker24almost 3 years ago

A talented writer but the subject matter is rather disturbing to me (violating fundamental rights, physical and psychological torture).

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

‘violating fundamental rights’ come on bro you’re reading smut lol

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