All Comments on 'In Which an Elven Servant... Ch. 30'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
An Update!

So glad to see the story continued! :D

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 6 years ago
The constant denial is so frustrating.

and I kinda hate Clara.

I want to know how this ends but I'm getting close to the end of my rope.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Don’t really understand

I really don’t understand why he won’t let her come when he’s fucking her, it’s counter productive to overall enjoyment. If she orgasms during sex it would heighten his pleasure too. Stepping back from the situation it makes all the humans appear as evil, they keep slaves and enjoy tormenting them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

At first this was cute. Now, this really is a horror story.

Wildwood55Wildwood55almost 2 years ago

Tthe orgasm denial with the succubus is understandable, but I just don't get it with the elf. There has been no explanation, or rationale, given, as there has been for Lucy. It makes him just seem like a dick; an inexperienced one, at that.

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