All Comments on 'Inappropriate Touching'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A very good story, but ...

... a few little typos. Two come to mind. Once, you typed "y" when (I think) you meant "way".

But the really big one is this: "tits and crutches are definitely no go areas." It's a good thing I wasn't drinking anything when I saw that, or I'd have made quite a mess!

But the story was very nice indeed. Keep it up, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More please!

I really like your stories - have read all of them listed and am hoping for many more, starting very soon!

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