by barcombe
... a few little typos. Two come to mind. Once, you typed "y" when (I think) you meant "way".
But the really big one is this: "tits and crutches are definitely no go areas." It's a good thing I wasn't drinking anything when I saw that, or I'd have made quite a mess!
But the story was very nice indeed. Keep it up, please.
I really like your stories - have read all of them listed and am hoping for many more, starting very soon!