All Comments on 'Incestory: Working Girl'

That was a little different than your usual. I'm not sure how to take it. It was also the first one that I noticed that didn't have some tie-in to your other stories. At least not yet. I still hope to see a little more girl-girl in your product; you're still a bit short on those. Nevertheless, even though this one had me scratching my head a bit, I still give it 5* just on the quality of your work. Keep them coming please.

I got carried out by your story.

You have a hell of a talent as a writer.

You should be earning tons of cash with your talent.

think about it and.

Keep going.

IF all these are connected then you need to retitle them using numbers so readers know what order to read them in. reading them out of order is confusing to say the least and makes readers give up and avoid you in the future due to your laziness with the titles. find a good editor and retitle these stories then they might be worth reading.

He could've talked to her and sorted things out; you don't leave your mom like that. Shit. Melanie is just a vengeful bitch and is using him, that's all.

I have a habit of over thinking incest stories. Thus is one of those stories that I am simply not sure of. Does the mother simply look at her son as another custimer? Does the son care so little about his mother that he leaves without saying? Sometimes I can not figure out what the author is trying to present.