All Comments on 'Incubus Ch. 03'

by ktmccoll

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Magus_RoninMagus_Roninover 14 years ago
Nice Work

Your story continues to intrigue and engaged me. I look forward to the next chapter. I wonder how many bits of erotica I've enjoyed have been secret daemon communiqués. XD

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
LOVE IT

im still hooked on this series u have going. love it :P can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well written!

I really like the pace and detail of your writing. Can't wait for the next installment! I keep checking back, hoping that Chapter 4 has been posted!

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenabout 14 years ago
Mind blowingly well written

An excellent tale. I'm very impressed.

jiskittenjiskittenover 13 years ago
Smiles

Each component of this story only adds to the texture and richness of your characters. Well done! Another five!

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
Deepens

As you thicken the plot, I feel myself getting more excited. Which means I can really feel what your character feel. And that makes this a truly wonderful story.Moving on to chapter 4.

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