by ktmccoll
As you thicken the plot, I feel myself getting more excited. Which means I can really feel what your character feel. And that makes this a truly wonderful story.Moving on to chapter 4.
Each component of this story only adds to the texture and richness of your characters. Well done! Another five!
I really like the pace and detail of your writing. Can't wait for the next installment! I keep checking back, hoping that Chapter 4 has been posted!
im still hooked on this series u have going. love it :P can't wait for more
Your story continues to intrigue and engaged me. I look forward to the next chapter. I wonder how many bits of erotica I've enjoyed have been secret daemon communiqués. XD