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"Remove my underwear, my demon." She purred. As he raised his hands, she clicked her tongue. "Tsk tsk, no no. With your teeth, Consort."
He had to seriously lean up for it. His face leaned close to her groin, and the scent of her was overpowering. His entire body ached for more, for that sweet spicy scent of her. His teeth slipped around the fabric the first time, and the second. On the third he found purchase, and dragged them slowly down. It took several tries to get them down, until she was satisfied. She stepped out from the panties once they got to her knees, and smiled.
"You're a fast learner. Now..." She knelt down in his lap, their bodies pressed together. Their hot nakedness was utterly perfect. Her ass rested against his hard shaft, and her body felt perfect. "Sit back and enjoy the ride."
She pushed on his chest, which he took as a sign to lay back. Once he had, she straddled his body, his cock standing straight up at attention in front of her. "Mine." She purred, and she lifted her hips. She hovered above him, and slowly started to sink down. It was almost torture it was so slow. His thick head pressed against her lips, and she gasped softly, biting her lip. "That's it..."
She lowered her hips, and engulfed the first few inches in her. She was like a hot, wet vice around him. "Fuck!" Sam groaned as his hands shot up, grabbing at her body. His hands found her ass like it was second nature, grasping at her and gently urging her downwards.
She lowered herself further and further. He watched the lewd display before him, as her pussy stretched around his thick shaft, swallowing inch after inch. However long she took, it was far too long as she took him into her, finally until she rested her groin against his, their bodies touching as she had reached the root of his cock.
"You feel perfect." She started to rock her hips slowly, rising and falling with shallow thrusts, just as if she was testing it.
Sam groaned as he watched her, her breasts shaking slightly with each thrust. She looked like perfection. Her body started to move faster, harder, riding him. Her hands splayed out, resting on his chest. She started to move at a comfortable rhythm, growling, grunting. "Fuck, yeah." She panted. "More, more."
Sam started to feel his demon rise again, his body thrusting up into her. That drew moans, squeals from her. He only wanted more, and she was all too willing to give it. It wasn't until he rolled his head back, the pleasure making him moan, that he realized the tigers were surrounding them. The women were all looking at him, as if waiting for something.
He lifted his head, looking back up at Alina. Her mouth was open, fangs now fully protruding from his mouth. He didn't know what to think at first.
Then she sunk her fangs into his neck for the second time in as many nights.
He came in her, and the last thoughts he had that resembled sanity made it out of his mouth.
"Oh, fucking hell..."
*****
I'm sorry for the wait, but I hope everyone enjoyed the latest chapter! Read, review, comment, and I can't wait for to get chapter 5 done!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoLoved the story and wished there was more, though it looks like you may have gotten chased off by the comments. On the one hand I absolutely understand how it must feel for you, but on the other hand, as another person that aspires to write I gotta say, the best things that will help you grow as a writer is critiques though they may be hardest to swallow. If all you see is "great job, can't wait for next chapter" that's good and all but you won't get better at all like that. I also have to admit I kinda agree with what's being said even though I still liked the chapter mind you. But yeah the lack of fighting / drama was a little letdown, but the other one was the fact he didn't go out of control when he lost his virginity. It's like you built up all this anticipation and worry from his concerns about losing control once he has sex, then he has sex and... nothing. I don't know if you were originally gonna have him react in some way next chapter or not but if you were gonna have something happen, it needed to happen "this" chapter when it was actually relevant, or even a precursor / cliffhanger. I get the feeling that unfortunately you left, but despite the negatives I still enjoyed the story and chapter and would love to see more in the future, even if it's looking grim in that department. It's your story in the end, but no offense, if you're going to put work out there for people to read, you have to be willing to accept the good and the bad opinions because you're putting your work out there to be judged. If you listen to the negatives they have many things in common that they all disliked, and you can use that to learn and progress your future writing and learn from your mistakes (yes, I view it as mistakes because it seems at least 90% of the readers/fans disliked this chapter, and ultimately you are writing for the fans. it shows because of how discouraged you got when they said bad things / truths about the chapter. If you weren't writing it for them, you wouldn't care about what they said). Anyway sorry for the rant and I wish you well in the future, hopefully someday you come back and add to this story, I for one would be back to read it.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoHere's an untried incubus having sex and he isn't doing his demon thing. It's tame vanilla sex. She doesn't need to be an alpha were to survive this. I thought he would be barely able to keep her alive.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI enjoy it, you choose our own pace. You have a great story, please continue. I reckon to those readers they are use to long reads.
