All Comments on 'Indentured to the Jarl'

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The_WatermanThe_Watermanalmost 6 years ago
Nice

I mean nicely constructed story, good flow, coherent, well written, interesting and descriptions were vivid. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
PO469

I enjoyed the story but I think I would have had him remove the gag at the end and had him make her clean his cock orally.

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I'm a 37 year old woman. I've been writing since I was big enough to hold a pencil. All kinds of works. Anywhere from fantasy and history, to modern, to the most erotic fantasy scene I get in my head. My writing comes from a delightful mix of personal experiences that are very...