All Comments on 'Independent Contractor'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
5 Stars

The only error I caught, and it might seem picky; however, when you are referring to a specific person by title, even if not using their proper name, it should be capitalized.

"Well to be fair to a president, it isn't technically sex"

President should be capitalized because you are referring to a specific person or position (no pun intended).

peebudypeebudyalmost 13 years ago

good story! I like the realistic descriptions of the characters. not everyone has beautiful bodies and 12 inch cocks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great story!

Would love to see ch 2!

brian358brian358almost 13 years ago
More Mimi!

Love the concept of this one, and its written in a carefree, fun style.

Add a gorgeous 19 year old with F (Borderline G) cups and you have a winner!

I, too, would love to see a sequel.

More Mimi! :-)

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