by rainbowdraco
The only error I caught, and it might seem picky; however, when you are referring to a specific person by title, even if not using their proper name, it should be capitalized.
"Well to be fair to a president, it isn't technically sex"
President should be capitalized because you are referring to a specific person or position (no pun intended).
good story! I like the realistic descriptions of the characters. not everyone has beautiful bodies and 12 inch cocks
Love the concept of this one, and its written in a carefree, fun style.
Add a gorgeous 19 year old with F (Borderline G) cups and you have a winner!
I, too, would love to see a sequel.
More Mimi! :-)