by funkyjunkymunkey
Oh it is too hot!!!.....
Expecting a more hot saturation in the next chapter!!
Great Masterpiece...the mother's reluctancy to her adopting mind is simply natural...u have a flair for writing, and pls dun let this story go to waste!
thanks for the story!!!
great story so far. please bring GURU sahib into the next chapter.
Hope they use the ultimate freedom in their forbidden union in the bed!!
firstly u r story ws awesome..the concept of sex and god is merged in the hindu religion..the symbol of shiva the linga is a the image of a penis entering the vagina and the process f pouring milk is the semen-ation of the same or the symbolism of an orgasm..the concept of sex with mother has been defines in the yogatattva sutra the "book of yoga" it merges all female identities and dilutes mother,sister..wife into one being.. with one supreme identity vis-a vis u.
I appreciate u very much.You are the best Incest Story Writter.I am prety sure that you are a great novel writter also.Fantastic story sir fantastic story.I loved it.
Thank youuuuuuuuu.
dear author, looks like the pair haven't take it to the next level! Anxiously waiting for your latest instalments!
Well done.. Your writing is igniting the fire incest.
Pl. write more...
Hope the next instalment will be less ravaging and more love-making, just to change the tempo a bit. The dirty talk was a pleasant surprise! Also- replace 'wretch' with 'retch' and 'bossoms' with just 'bossom'.
You are posting the next chapter or not?
Please post it,I'm dying ...........
Hi Funky,
You have an ability to write nice stories!!This story seems unfinished.I think it is a good sign for a writer!!Expecting its new level!!!
A wonderful story.Story proves that love of mother is great.
The son has done his duty very well by liberating mother
from stupid inhibitions.Expecting more from the same author
about the lovemaking mothers.
waiting for next chapter & vaginal intercourse.
one of the best all time indian mother son stories...please write more ...
After the desired years to fuck his mother's pussy, when he can have it finally, he just fuck her in the ass! Perverse, abnormal and absolutely disgusting, because nothing compares with delicious of a pussy. Boy you are unhealthy and you should see your doctor! Too bad, could be a good story, if he fucked her in her pussy at least once. That's a story for ass fuckers and wankers, not for those straights as the large majority are ... So ... I did absolutely dislike your story!
My comment is for all parts:
I've read thousands of incest stories & some r so special! One is The Autobiography by Alok_ji, another is "Oh mommy... I groaned" (unfortunately i can't recall some other names). But this one, i'd of objective to say, is really the greatest i've been reading in the last 10yrs. Why?
1. The relationship takes time to build. It doesn't only happen on a day.
2. Great details r there how they come close, how their passion intensifies.
3. The language in which her body is described is awesome.
4. The details of step by step greater sexuality in yoni & lingum puja showed ur master craftmanship. It takes a lot of control not to start the final game after a few hundred words.
A REQUEST: India has enjoyed centuries of teen sex. Why don't write a story where 12/13yr old girls enjoy sexual bliss with their parents (it's not very uncommon) or where there is group & mutual sex between members of a big family. In some families teen girls r presented to their father by their mother. Again a 16/17 yr boy marrying his mom & sister- this kind of stories will get life in ur hand & popularity by fans, that's for sure. Tons of thanks.
bro, your concept is very nice,, but it'll be more interesting agar beta Baap, Dada, Dadi ke kahne par sabke samne apni Maa ki Yoni Puja karega apni gharki bhalai ke liye...Aur Dadi, Maa, Behen sab beta ki ling puja karenge.. Khulam khula
my mail: odiyabanda@yahoo.in
Idiot..do you ever know, who a mother is? You want to fuck a place where you were created?? How your bloody brain thought of this story.How dare you comment on Hindu rituals. Sure..you will be eaten by dogs. Your mother would have mourned to have given birth to you..Orey, nirbhagyuda..bhrashtu pattina samskruthi ra needhi.yedhava. Remember one thing..If I have known you in person...I would have told you how it would be being fucked that way.
the pregnancy should be blessed by the guruji
Every Chapter until this last one was sexy and enjoyable . . . . . BUT . . . . .the final chapter was just over the top disgusting. Degradation and humiliation has NO place in a loving relationship. Ch 1-6 were GREAT! Chapter 7 was yeeech.
7 chapters leading up to a moment disappointed by anal.
What a waste.