All Comments on 'Indigenous Lust'

Sorry, could not finish the story because it was too disjointed. Nowhere did you elude to him wanting Kat and all of a sudden he has been jerking off thinking about her while possibly screwing her older sister? Kat says he has to obey and in the next sentence he is giving an order to her. Hard to enjoy a story when you have to work to try and understand what is happening.

Please, take it down, send to an editor and then repost.

Another LAZY author who uses apostrophe's instead of quotation marks for dialog. Pure laziness.

Was there supposed to be a story to introduce this one.?

Make George even more sexy by giving him a hairy chest and abs!

Seems like the names were used interchangeably. Hard to tell who was who.