All Comments on 'Innocence Lost During the War'

I liked your story. But please reread it b4 you post it. There were a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Still a good story.

I don't know about your past work but this is the first time I have taken the time to comment. You have a talent for telling a story. Use it often. You're good.

I've never commented b4, was pulled in to your story and re-read it 5 times. A very nice story.

Such a lucky boy you were to have the help of an experienced woman to lead you to your very first time. I enjoyed your experience very much. Thank you for such a nice story.

true lite is so uncomman that when it comes out it is a breath of fresh air!

That was quite a read. I enjoyed it.

Outstanding 1st time love story humblyyours. Keep posting and I'll definately keep reading.

loved it. but did u ever marry lisa?

It took a while to get into the story for me, but it was excellently, lyrically written. Great job, humblyyours.

OUTSTANDING story!

Enjoyable first time story. Tender and erotic. Nicely told.

I love this story, tender and sweet. Not many men have your courage to write about their first time. Well done humblyyours

I read the story expecting a story about enemas, and while it was not a central theme of the story I found the story compelling and enjoyable.

Well Done

Your story has triggered and 50 year old memory. I only wish mine had been and rewarding as yours. Amazing !!!

but I guess we will never know what happened next