by humblyyours
but I guess we will never know what happened next
Your story has triggered and 50 year old memory. I only wish mine had been and rewarding as yours. Amazing !!!
I read the story expecting a story about enemas, and while it was not a central theme of the story I found the story compelling and enjoyable.
Well Done
I love this story, tender and sweet. Not many men have your courage to write about their first time. Well done humblyyours
Enjoyable first time story. Tender and erotic. Nicely told.
It took a while to get into the story for me, but it was excellently, lyrically written. Great job, humblyyours.
Outstanding 1st time love story humblyyours. Keep posting and I'll definately keep reading.
true lite is so uncomman that when it comes out it is a breath of fresh air!
Such a lucky boy you were to have the help of an experienced woman to lead you to your very first time. I enjoyed your experience very much. Thank you for such a nice story.
I've never commented b4, was pulled in to your story and re-read it 5 times. A very nice story.
I don't know about your past work but this is the first time I have taken the time to comment. You have a talent for telling a story. Use it often. You're good.
I liked your story. But please reread it b4 you post it. There were a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Still a good story.