All Comments on 'Innocence Lost During the War'

by humblyyours

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rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
very good as far as it goes

but I guess we will never know what happened next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Amazing

Your story has triggered and 50 year old memory. I only wish mine had been and rewarding as yours. Amazing !!!

jagkar52jagkar52about 11 years ago
A very sensuous story

I read the story expecting a story about enemas, and while it was not a central theme of the story I found the story compelling and enjoyable.

Well Done

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
delightful story

I love this story, tender and sweet. Not many men have your courage to write about their first time. Well done humblyyours

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 14 years ago
With a little help from my friend

Enjoyable first time story. Tender and erotic. Nicely told.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
damn .. DAMN!

OUTSTANDING story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent

It took a while to get into the story for me, but it was excellently, lyrically written. Great job, humblyyours.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
wut happens next?

loved it. but did u ever marry lisa?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Outstanding 1st time love story humblyyours. Keep posting and I'll definately keep reading.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Great story humblyyours

That was quite a read. I enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
true lite

true lite is so uncomman that when it comes out it is a breath of fresh air!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
nice story

Such a lucky boy you were to have the help of an experienced woman to lead you to your very first time. I enjoyed your experience very much. Thank you for such a nice story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
nice story

I've never commented b4, was pulled in to your story and re-read it 5 times. A very nice story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
You have a talent

I don't know about your past work but this is the first time I have taken the time to comment. You have a talent for telling a story. Use it often. You're good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
GOodSTory

I liked your story. But please reread it b4 you post it. There were a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Still a good story.

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