All Comments on 'Innocence Pt. 02'

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Black_and_White_WriterBlack_and_White_Writeralmost 9 years ago
A Great Improvement

This is gtting a lot better. The story just needs more detail though. Not loads, but a bit.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Keep at it.

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