All Comments on 'Innocent'

please dont stop now, this could be a very fun story. Seems she likes fucking and wants her big bro to keep doing her. I can see a baby in there soon.

Mark had gone to the ...... Please get someone to edit or at least read it yourself carefully. Mistakes detract from a vood story

didn't she ever talk to any other girls? or listen when they talked? I've had so many girls/women because of what my big sister taught me about girls that other guys didn't know

This is a great story, but it needs more sensory detail.

Have Mark strip naked. That should really excite Mary when she sees her older brother's sexy body!

In my experience the products of Catholic Girls Schools usually bang like barn doors in a gale.

Love the story

Hope you will follow with more lessons.

Great story, but could of been so much more build up to the climax! Like teaching her oral skills both giving and receiving. Keep up the good work, make the story tell a classy tale, not a slam, bang, thank you mam!

Mark had not seen her in a couple of years " because he lived a couple of hours away ". Does the story take place before the invention of the automobile? Just wondering.

Very very good and hot story ...... now that Mark has helped his baby sister's tingle to go away and wants more, he needs to show her how they can really have fun. We need more of your well written story to have Mary get educated by her brother. Thanks !

More please.

Definitely need more!

Hoping it gets hotter. Thanks for sharing.

You're writing like a illiterate 12 year old with dyslexia and no clue on life. Go watch some porn and at least learn something about sex because you're clearly clueless. What a colossal waste of time.