All Comments on 'Interbred Ch. 03'

I see you have a good plot line. And I like what I have read so far. I hope you keep going. Also if it is going to be so long between posting you might want to try and make your chapters longer. Just a suggestion. I find just as I start to settle into the story its over till the next chapter.

Way too short. You need to post more if we have to wait so long. =(

Maybe it's just me, but I found it a bit confusing to follow who was from where & how they're related.

OK,im confused,,,are they japanese??never heard of a blond one,,but the names fit..Who is related, to whom,no background on any of them,except for the first chapter,were/vamp meets baby mate,WHO IS SHE??where is she..Im just lost on the story and the grammer sucks,chapters way to short...you have good ideas,,just cant follow the story line it goes so fast and choppy...have added you as a fav,,will follow you for a bit and see how things turn out,,,good luck..maybe an editor??/

Erm.... could you please spend a little more time on each part of the plot to explain or show depth in the scene, or a background or whatever. It is really difficult to catch the "goings-on". There's no need to rush the story.

Sweetheart, your stories are fabulous! You tease and taunt your readers with little tidbits. It is up to each one of us to fill in the gaps.

Your stories force us to use our imagination!

You are a very HOT vixen, darling, and I for one wet easily sharing your open sexuality. Please keep going!

S L