by MythMaker
Was not as impressed with the second one. There were so many other directions that you could have taken with this one. Maybe its my dislike of anal that decided it for me bit the chapter was so short that there was no space to develops any other scenarios. Keep writing you will get there.
Thank you for the dedication! LOL I've been away for some time... I have to say, this was great!
Incomplete after two years don’t bother.