All Comments on 'Interlude'

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ReefBeachReefBeachover 7 years ago
Silly

But so much fun!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
hehe ..

hehe .....yep I believe every word you wrote in that thar story as the gospel truth.!**

gave you a "5" cause i liked it and kinda off the wall kinda kink and all.! yep.*

hope that ole man don't go to jail over what he done as it was all in fun.*

i will watch the news this week and see.

HM8485HM8485over 7 years ago
Thank you.

A very enjoyable read. I gave you a 5 and hope to see more of his adventures, or those of Ruby and Pearl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
more please

a second rendezvous with Pearl will be exciting!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
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had to stop reading after the first piece of dialogue. i couldn't suspend my disbelief that far, i mean seriously, what a cringy attempt at writing a conversation

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