by Ashson
hehe .....yep I believe every word you wrote in that thar story as the gospel truth.!**
gave you a "5" cause i liked it and kinda off the wall kinda kink and all.! yep.*
hope that ole man don't go to jail over what he done as it was all in fun.*
i will watch the news this week and see.
A very enjoyable read. I gave you a 5 and hope to see more of his adventures, or those of Ruby and Pearl.
had to stop reading after the first piece of dialogue. i couldn't suspend my disbelief that far, i mean seriously, what a cringy attempt at writing a conversation