All Comments on 'Into the Deep Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Well, that was interesting, if overstated.....

How does one "pound her pussy lovingly"?

Also, "conjure", not "conger". There were several others, but this one was pretty annoying.

Really, it's not that hard to get it right. Why not put the additional effort in?

While it won't improve the story, much, it will make the reading experience much more pleasant. And will reduce the tendency for readers to nit-pick.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Getting kind of boring; just variations on fucking. No plot, no drama; what's the point?

Great that husband and wife are so adventurous and enjoying their marriage and their bodies. But the story is more like a window into their sex life. Probably more interesting for a less mature audience? Its great fucking, but its just fucking.

gordo12gordo12almost 9 years ago
Wrong Category

LW = Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more.

Do I see any extra marital fun.....no

swinging.......no

sharing........no

more???? only BDSM which belongs in another category entirely! 1*

coffeekid63coffeekid63almost 9 years ago
Great glimpse

Great glimpse into what a marriage bedroom can be. I liked all 3 chapters.

chytownchytownover 8 years ago
Sexy Fun****

Now that's good sex, Thanks for sharing.

OnethirdOnethirdover 7 years ago
And then

This needs more chapters. Very well described fun between two consenting adults, for now.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Not bad

Not nearly as bad as I thought it would be.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchover 4 years ago
Great story, no cuck BS, despite the foreshadow in pt one

Thanks o2m!

Mac_LapuMac_Lapuover 1 year ago

Very good series.

For a while the chapter I was worried that KaTe would cross the boundaries of monogamy. Glad it didn't. Thanks author

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