by one2many
How does one "pound her pussy lovingly"?
Also, "conjure", not "conger". There were several others, but this one was pretty annoying.
Really, it's not that hard to get it right. Why not put the additional effort in?
While it won't improve the story, much, it will make the reading experience much more pleasant. And will reduce the tendency for readers to nit-pick.
Great that husband and wife are so adventurous and enjoying their marriage and their bodies. But the story is more like a window into their sex life. Probably more interesting for a less mature audience? Its great fucking, but its just fucking.
LW = Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more.
Do I see any extra marital fun.....no
swinging.......no
sharing........no
more???? only BDSM which belongs in another category entirely! 1*
Great glimpse into what a marriage bedroom can be. I liked all 3 chapters.
This needs more chapters. Very well described fun between two consenting adults, for now.
Very good series.
For a while the chapter I was worried that KaTe would cross the boundaries of monogamy. Glad it didn't. Thanks author