All Comments on 'Into the Garden Ch. 04-06'

for into the garden Chap. 3. The tension (racial, societal, not sexual) is barely mentioned but is part of nearly every paragraph. This story is beautifully told, restrained and, I am sure, will explode with serious consequence soon. Welcome to Lit, Carlieplum.

Great flow to the story. Not right into,like some kinda porn.

Could you put more page's in the chapter's.