by carlieplum
Great flow to the story. Not right into,like some kinda porn.
Could you put more page's in the chapter's.
for into the garden Chap. 3. The tension (racial, societal, not sexual) is barely mentioned but is part of nearly every paragraph. This story is beautifully told, restrained and, I am sure, will explode with serious consequence soon. Welcome to Lit, Carlieplum.