All Comments on 'Into the Woods Ch. 01'

Well...at least somebody'd having fun.

Garbage writing.

Also no point in multiple chapters when you give the ending away.

Different Chapters all about Sarah. With different themes. Sorry you didn't enjoy it; I'm still really proud of it.

Ah, you got me! I felt guilty reading on, as I was getting turned on, but knew I shouldn’t be, given this was rape. Then you caught me off-guard with the ending. Where will this go now? Write more please. Yes there were a few little errors, but it definitely did not spoil the piece for me.

I very nice short story. Nice little build up and a surprise ending!! Way to go Sarah!

Looking foward to more