by HR1983
Please keep it coming im hooked. I'm love how you've made him human not a monster. Bringing in the trust factor and aftercare which to many of these stories seem to forget.
I'm scared of where she'll find herself when the drugs wear off.
You paint a rather chilling picture of a madman! This 'fabricated' master who is savouring and saving her virginity like some great climax to a gargantuan pile-up of blowjobs, seems far more coo-coo and sinister than Mr.Must-have-whip-or-pussy-gets-me. This is becoming really interesting.
Oh and get him to install the audio in the visitors' bedroom. He'll give me a heart-attack!
Evebroughtanaxthistime
For the love of god, write faster! I literally check your profile eveyday to see if there is a new chapter. Oh well I guess you can't rush a genius.
I must admit I didn't intend to finish this piece, but the comments have been very motivating! I have the next couple scenes written out but finding a way to tie them together without it becoming choppy is a challenge. I promise not to leave you in suspense much longer, I should be able to submit the next chapter tommorow!
Well I personally can't get enough of the story so please don't stop writing!!