All Comments on 'Introspections Ch. 13'

Amazing twist but the order is backwards! Put the scene in the hotel first. Knowing what was coming made me want to skip most of the hotel scene to find out what James would do once he found out.

Eliya, I did just that.

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I did too!

But I'm still very much enjoying this story!

bbc

Especially since Agent Perkins just pulled over to wait in the car instead of taking Hannah to a safe house. I agree that if the scenes had been reversed, there would have been more suspense to increase the dynamic tension. Somehow I suspected Agent Perkins from the moment she was previously introduced.

Nthusiastic