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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Utter crap

Please learn to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

The story feels way too rushed. Try to slow down a bit and use correct grammar and punctuation. It'll greatly improve the quality of the story.

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