All Comments on 'Irene & Oscar Pt. 02'

Until now...no major differences from "Ideas"..."Ideas" needed more than change some writing...It needed to change the plot a lot...And that end, destroyed the whole story...And as nothing changed in this new (?) approach until now, why the need to re-write it?

Whats the point? A degraded cock cage wearing cum eating cuckold.Erotic? No! They ceased being man and wife.Oscar and wifey would be better off separated

Practice is good. But like most practice, and this story, its not the real thing. In fact, you should be embarrassed to be associated with this sad cuck shit. You really have no more wit, intelligence, or originality than this story reflects? Keep your day job.

....a couple that can't or won't be even moderately honest with themselves or each other. It's like a broken form of denial...itself another form of lie.

What a sad life they lead.

No story here, just a tragic mistake being played out in uninteresting writing.

Pretty good so far. Well written.

Congratulations!!!