All Comments on 'Irene Pt. 03'

by arislesbos

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chytownchytownabout 8 years ago
Thanks***

For sharing.

impo_61impo_61about 8 years ago
I liked this story...

I liked this story...It's full of sex, but at the same time it's so candid...3*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wow was that a smoking pile of cow dung.

A bunch of sex and no plot. Just plain bad. And why is it in LW?

bonnietaylor2bonnietaylor2about 8 years ago
Again if anyone knos cow shit it's dear annony your life is full of it!! 5

for effort and content and to help your score from you know who!!! In case you don't the asshole of LIT dear annony.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
What a load of

Bonnie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Not as strong as the previous chapters.

But thanks for continuing. I hope it gets more interesting. The whole concept of this guy not remember fucking his wife's friend is a pointless plot device, and lame. If he can't remember it, then it might as well not have happened. Not really sure what was the point or purpose of this chapter.

And I don't care if you allow grading or not. It won't affect what anyone thinks of your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
He deserves everything he gets.

S.T.D, A.I.D.s, BASTARD CHILDREN, HEPATITIS, WHAT FUN!

bonnietaylor2bonnietaylor2about 8 years ago
And if the ashole of LIT doesn't like it or gives a 1, I will

alway give you a 5 to offset this fool idea of hate!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I liked it a lot! I would give you four or five stars if I could.

Thank you for sharing this with us. I like these characters, and would love to see more about them.

Also, regarding the previous commenters, Literotica is apparently chock full of leaking rectums. I'm talking to the kind of person who would 1-bomb a story simply because someone they are having a feud with likes it.

Must be a Trump voter, for sure!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Never really went anywhere beyond sexual vignettes strung together.

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