All Comments on 'Irresistible Girl'

Loved it.

Two of my fav's, incest and bondage.

Well done

Nice use of characters

Good writing. I just wish you hadn't ruined it by the "description" attached to the title. The reader knew at some point Mommy would get involved. Ruined the twist at the end.

@Forthememories--Dang it, you're right. I wonder if I can edit that or if it's too late at this point. Thank you--good catch.

And thanks to other commenters as well!

This was a pretty good story if not one of the best. Just keep trying and learn from the mistakes you made with this.