All Comments on 'Irresistible Girl'

This was a pretty good story if not one of the best. Just keep trying and learn from the mistakes you made with this.

@Forthememories--Dang it, you're right. I wonder if I can edit that or if it's too late at this point. Thank you--good catch.

And thanks to other commenters as well!

Good writing. I just wish you hadn't ruined it by the "description" attached to the title. The reader knew at some point Mommy would get involved. Ruined the twist at the end.

Nice use of characters

Loved it.

Two of my fav's, incest and bondage.

Well done