All Comments on 'Is Love All or Nothing? Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Trying too hard?

I have loved this story so far, but this seems to be trying too hard to manufacture drama. Relationships are hard enough without other outside plotting, especially for those of us with social difficulties. This was a disappointing turn to one of my favorite stories on this site.

I have loved this series so far and can relate for various reasons with Keith.

DestinyReaderDestinyReaderabout 7 years agoAuthor
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I can understand where you are coming from and I will admit this chapter wasn't one of my favorite to write, but it is meant as a setup for something bigger. I promise in the end it will be well worth it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Cheats should never win.

More PLEASE! I am a new reader here; I am not a writer. I really like your character development. BUT, the last month has been a long wait.

DestinyReaderDestinyReaderalmost 7 years agoAuthor

The newest chapter has just been sent to my editor and once I get to back from him I will post it.

Yes, I know it has been a long wait for the next chapter, but life takes precedent over writing. I will start writing chapter 13 soon and hopefully have it done in less than a month. I think I mentioned this in a previous chapter but my Asperger's aims for me to do my best and sometimes I struggle to find right words or how to write a certain situation. I'm also going back to previous chapters a lot to make sure there is good continuity.

I want to write best story I can for my readers and sadly that takes time. I do thank everyone who has been patient and will keep asking for your patience.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Not a good turn

I don't care for the turn this took at the end. This has been a good quality story. Be careful not to add too much side drama that is destructive.

gcs66gcs66over 6 years ago
good series

love your work

DestinyReaderDestinyReaderover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank You gcs66

I know everyone is patiently (maybe impatiently too) waiting for the next chapter. It is slowly being written but life again has gotten busy and crazy with working two jobs every weekday and the holidays to boot. Yes, chapter 16 is being worked on and I promise it will be worth the wait.

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The final chapter of "Love of Autism" has been sent to my editor. Yes, the final chapter.

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