All Comments on 'It Begins Ch. 05'

I really love this story and hope that there are many, many, many more chapters to come!

It's beautiful to see Michael's early lust changing into real love for his sister, and Kathy's half fearful doubts, as she recalls her first experiences of the animal in the guys she has known, respond to her brother's understanding compassion towards her. Their attraction must, of course, either be denied, or culminate in bodily merging; but if they merge, it should be as true partners, not as something like predator and prey. Can Michael, though, handle the woman who is learning her true sexual nature through his love?

Siblings can help each other out and enjoy the experience. It can be very beneficial to both in reducing stress and improving confidence. Must be comfortable with mutual progression.

I read a lot of this brother / sister of stories for a thrill but this one was so real I actually cried because it was so nice and I so hope these two can be happy in their future lives. Thank you so much for a lovely story

There are some very good authors on this site. You are one of them. Please keep up the wonderful work.

that I didn't begin reading this story before this chapter came along. The wait between chapters would have made me miserable. This way I read from the first to the 5th chapters in immediate, consecutive order. Bravo, for truly exceptional writing in a place where a poorly written stories gets high praise from some. It is worth the wait to be able to enjoy stories by writers of your calibre.

great story and writing is pretty good too... I hope you'd start another story on the same genre once again...

I love the way you are writing this story. It's not just about sex. I like how you show their thoughts and how they are struggling to deal with their feelings for each other.

I'm in agreement with Rwa4768

Cant wait for everything their future holds, from kids to sex, love, commitment and eventually coming out.

this is so very wonderful.

expressed and written in a very compassionate, loving way. You have certainly captivated me and quite simply, this is beautiful!

To all those jack nuts who keeps saying the story is too slow you can all go kindly write your own damn story however the hell you want. This author is doing what they want to do. Also if you don’t like how the story is going don’t read it dumbass

Much much better! Now you're getting the story that I want to read. They should have been confessing love for each other two or three chapters back.