All Comments on 'It Had to Happen...'

Believable! well-written as a dream! good start!

This reads like an Erotic Coupling category story.

Then we find that even that was all a dream.

So no romance and no sex.

All just an effing wet dream.

What was there was vivid and interesting, but in the end unsatisfying.

Who are they? Roommates? You can't have romance without personality. This needs a page of opening dialogue or something. The sex parts are hot, but there's no emotional investment in the characters.