All Comments on 'It Started with the Shoes Pt. 02'

Stone cold sober. Well, technically I suppose so. Being whacked out on oxycontin for orthopedic issues is not the same as drunk. It also goes a long way towards explaining the rest of the goings on. The story is progressing so quickly and is so crammed with happenings, you're rapidly approaching a cliff which will need jumping. At the rate she is going, she'll be selling herself into actual slavery on a crate filled freighter bound for ports unknown.

I enjoyed the story (so far) but wondered what she was getting all the erotic jewelry for? He hasn't taken advantage of the nipple rings or the labia rings. Shouldn't she be tied open down below for a while? necklaces that end on the nipples? Strings that loop around her neck to hold them up?