All Comments on 'It was Late'

Good story but you use the word 'she' to much, it started to get annnoying. A couple of the paragraphs are to long and could have done with breaking up into smaller one's. I found myself losing my place in the story a couple of times because of it, so that doesn't help. Other than that, a good story.

It is my humble opinion that people who feel justified in criticising an author's grammar should at least be able to spell themselves.

Where can I rent a police uniform! LOL