All Comments on 'It was The Best Day'

by mrfmr

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FASfanFASfanabout 6 years ago
Great, nostalgic story ...

... thank you for sharing it with us. Five stars and a favourite.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great Story!

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
good ideas, but PLEASE PROOFREAD!!

there, their and they're are NOT the same!!

Waiting for Chapter 1!!

savage4xsavage4xabout 6 years ago
Very Good

Great, sexy story, reads well with good dialogue and believable characters. Thanks very much for writing and sharing.

zooliciouszooliciousabout 6 years ago
ahhhh...the memories

Enjoyed the pacing and how your story brought back some great memories of some old girlfriends.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Sexy pair

Once he removes his shirt let HER play with his pecs -- incredibly sensitive on some men! (After all, she did reach over his shoulders to put sunscreen across his chest and abs!) And if he should have the beginnings of a bit of chest hair, especially in the center of his pecs -- all the more sexy to touch and sight!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
waiting for chapter 2

I think you have to good beginning

VictrixxVictrixxalmost 5 years ago
Nice.

Very nice. I hope you revisit and continue the story someday.

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