by redptc
Yes, well written and amusing, but as for a reality check, you wish!
Yes, you set the scene and described what sounded like a storey based in truth. You put the reader in the picture in an uncomfortable way and, in my case, I felt I was there with you and face to face with my first cock! I'm glad you were not afraid to get on with things and enjoy yourself especially with the wife watching. Like you, I found that because she was there it was all the more pleasuable.
I'm just sorry that there wasn't a 'follow-up' storey or two.
Well written and a delight to read. I read it slowly and was jerking vigourously at the end. Perhaps that is what made me so content with this tale!UK
At first I thought it was a boring sort of storey but It got better as things moved along. I let myself think about what was happening and I wished I was in on things. It wasn't long before I got really into it with my cock in my hands.
Yep, it is something I would to happen to me.
Oh you made me feel all funny, I don't think I've ever read anything so real, despite my opposite sex it took me back to my own teens, the fear, pain, and pure excitement did it for me
Very nice, indeed ! I admire your descriptions. As a new writer of erotica, I enjoy reading stories like yours. Thank you for sharing your talent !