All Comments on 'It's Been So Long'

Didn't ring true, evenif the idea was there.

Just not the way an 18 year old girl would speak and least of all act.

Sorry, but from one feamle to another, start over.

yo fuck that comment this was a pretty good story i honestly loved keep writing

a few more drafts and speach re written, you could have a believable story, but some dialogue is a little hard to believe.

good but could have been better especially if you had finished the story by letting us know what happened when the parents came home did the parents find out did the kids move out together did she get pregnantyou left a lot up in the air