All Comments on 'It's Good To Have An Older Sister Ch. 01'

One of the best stories that I have ever read on here. !!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB !!!!!!!!

Well written over all ... I enjoyed it quite a bit and got quite aroused reading it. I did find some of the typos and missing/extra words a bit distracting. With a little bit of proofreading by someone and the cleanup that would follow this will be a terrific piece! Just be sure you get someone who knows their stuff about proofreading.

That story got hotter as it went. Good job!

Excellent story. To have been the horny lil fly on the wall in the bedroom as the story was being told... but hey, with you excellent writing and story telling, (save for the minor typos) I guess I was. :-) I hope you've put forth the effort and energy to make the other chapters as good. I'll be sure to give you feedback and let you know. :-) Ray.

Trying to tell two stories at once, both of which are awful and pointless.

What a great and sweet story...keep them coming...

great story... written in simple terms so it can be read quickly providing faster arousel.

Nice job. Got me hard as I read it. Thanks.

Loved it! The flashback storytelling during the incest-sister exercises wasTRULY a HOT inspiration! U go girl. Gr8 stuff, sweetheart. Well written 2! Rare on this site.

There were more typos here then on a firts grader's spelling test, and there is no doubt a christian base to this story, which completely made it dreadful. A PURE EYEBLIGHT.