by RebeccaBrowning
i loved part 4 and was relieved to read you found someone decent: Suzanne. It was ironic that Mike brought her to you and then got what he deserved - rejection - less than nothing. Pity you spoiled that. Beautifully written. Now I look forward to the rest. Peter
Please excuse the delay in chapter 5 and beyond. My computer crashed, or I crashed it, and everything I had written was lost. Hopefully I will have chapter 5 up by Christmas.
E-mail went wacky too, so if you've written me and not gotten a response, please resend it because I probably didn't get it. I'll always try to answer everybody, and I apologize to anybody who thought I slighted you.
I'd never do that intentionally, because I LOVE all you people who are kind enough to write and comment. You folks are the best!
That was another great chapter. I like your style of writing. It is very descriptive and yet still easy to follow. I sense a change in Becky from reluctant to active participant. Well done.
Thank you, Rebecca, for sharing this first time experience. They are often so special that sharing them is an honor. I love how you write: simple, straightforward, erotic, honest. I am sorry you had to endure an unfaithful Mike. Would that I could have had his seat, or much better, joined in.
Susan
I felt like I was in the bedroom with you. That's how vivid the picture was that you painted. You have a gift and I'm so glad that you are sharing it. Thank you!
you have a nice talent with the way you tell your stories, keep up the good work
I would have loved to have been there watching too, and if he was antwhere near as hot to watch as it was to read I would have needed more sock too :) !!!
Wonderfully erotic tale that is helped so much by the little details that you add along the way. Can't wait for the next chapter!