All Comments on 'It's Only Right, Isn't It'

Why did you write "Joey had a 14 year old looking face"? That was just creepy. It added to everything wrong with this tale.

I have to wonder if you got drunk or high before you began writing. The story is full of nonsensical lines that leave the reader wondering what you were trying to say. For instance:

"Few of the girls his age or older in the 1950s neighborhood had little ambition to attend college and were more interested..."

Not "Few girls had the ambition to attend college..." or "The girls had little ambition to attend college...". Nope. You wrote, essentially, "Few girls had little ambition..." Which means, when you unscramble it, "Most girls HAD ambition." Right?

You seem to have made an effort to appear clever, but sorry. You failed this time around.

The Lit is one of the few places on web, where we can be sure of nothing related to underage porn.

That is why so many of us come to this forum.

There was no need for you to suggest that Joe has a 14 year old face or any thing like that.

Frankly any references to under age participants in sex here at the Lit is NOT RIGHT.

A sexual relation in the Family is beautiful, it is great love.