All Comments on 'It's Only Your Hand Ch. 02'

by Steve Orshon

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simjim100simjim100over 18 years ago
Good so far

I don't know if any of this is true but it is very believable and well written. I'm looking for more episodes with eventual full swinging or at least a hot threesome MMF for Paula. I'm sure I'm not the only one. Don't keep us waiting. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
OK

Don't know if I would have them do full swinging but if this is a true story then what happens happens! Marital bounds should be respected...but what did really happen? Did Paula end up having sex with Charlie and Sean with Rose? If done the right way it could be very very hot.

Swinging can go too many ways and too many sluts appear from swinging. I hope you don't make Paula a slut, would kill the story, whether fiction or in real life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I really enjoyed

I thought this was really hot and hope there is more. I could really get myself into thinking this happened to me (wishing).

petergozpetergozabout 18 years ago
Nice and slow, let's have more

Love your stories, I think very realistic. More of your and Paula's adventures. (Free Sample was probably my favorite.)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Inspiring

Very well done. My wife and I are planning a trip to the Dominican Republic, and your stories have inspired us to at least consider making a few fantasies come true if we get the chance. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
More!

Come on Steve...give us some more. I want to know how much Sean can con his spunky wife in to doing...un-leash the slut from within now Paula has had a "taste".

Coops

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A Great story

I loved it keep it coming let there be more.

Pat.

Atlanta,Ga.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Wish I were there.

Dear Steve,

Your story makes me long for the summer holydays and a place like the resort at Negril. Sean is a lucky man he can help his wife overcome her inhibitions and have all this fun together. The reluctance of Paula and her changing moods ad a lot to make it a real live story, but the story wouldn't be worth telling if the lines about that had not been washed away with the spicy lines about fulfilling fantasies and exploring new sexy things. What a way to spend a summer holiday.

Markgraf

flixxxnpixxxflixxxnpixxxabout 10 years ago
Loved it!

Your story reminded me of many past personal experiences. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Cumming together !

Great story .Again very real in that no one turned into an instant slut. All were sharing with a strong possibility of more, keeping us hard and waiting.

realscott325realscott325over 7 years ago
Loved it!

Can't wait for more. Please keep it going. 5*

Soo_DeliciousSoo_Deliciousalmost 7 years ago
Really well done!

Great pacing; really well done! Looking (hoping?) for lots and lots more!

bimale63bimale63over 6 years ago
Nice

Very well told very hot and erotic

eibirbeibirbalmost 4 years ago

Nicely written. Portrays a developing situation and does not go OTT.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
nice development

Nice buildup with the story and believable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

very good, I woul have liked to hear reaction if more hap.

Buster2UBuster2Uabout 2 months ago

10 Big Blazing Stars for a hot hot hot story! Great writing, great fun adventure. Thanks, Buster2U

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