All Comments on 'Jack and Jill's Parallel World Trip Ch. 01'

by MeatBeat117

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Jkirk3279Jkirk3279almost 6 years ago
Hmmm

The concept has "legs".

If it's easy to cross between worlds, you COULD bring the sexy version of Lyla into contact with the "normal" version.

Imagine her watching a guy have sex with her alternate universe self...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Lots of potential

Dude please keep going, this has enornous potential and lots of incredible scenarios. I'm eagerly waiting!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Character Descriptions?

You’ve got potential. I like how the story gets into the sex pretty quickly, but what do your characters look like?

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