by MeatBeat117
You’ve got potential. I like how the story gets into the sex pretty quickly, but what do your characters look like?
Dude please keep going, this has enornous potential and lots of incredible scenarios. I'm eagerly waiting!
The concept has "legs".
If it's easy to cross between worlds, you COULD bring the sexy version of Lyla into contact with the "normal" version.
Imagine her watching a guy have sex with her alternate universe self...