All Comments on 'Jack Johnson - Montana Wilderness Ch. 03'

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JKQBALLJKQBALLover 15 years ago
OUTSTANDING

SIMPLY AN OUTSTANDING STORY, LOVED IT. ONE RECOMMENDATION POST IT ON STORIESONLINE.NET. THEY WOULD LOVE IT, NO 3 PARTS, ONE STORY, JUST AWESOME.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
A GREAT read!

I've read this story 3 times and loved it more each time. It's more than a story of incest! It is a great life story which does happen.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Grammar

I've read a number of your stories & enjoyed all, in the most part. However, one thing stands out. You use the word "your" in all contexts, including the abbreviated "you are" which is "you're".

Other than that, very, very enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wow...

I love this story--she needs to get pregnant now and they should 'marry'.

mrpervy46mrpervy46over 12 years ago
Great Story

I hope you continue with it. Great story bud, very much into incest romance. I hope she has his baby.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great!

I really hope she gets pregnant. He would have the family he wanted. He can build on the house. Great story. Hurry and add more!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Chapter 4 - making babies?

Marklynda2Marklynda2almost 2 years ago

Gotta love your Muse!

Great story, just enough sex to keep us stroking, lol! Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Marklynda2Marklynda2almost 2 years ago

When your 'little woman' is your daughter.

Enjoyed the story! Looking forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for sharing your vision and talents.

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